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Alone in the corner is where I was sitting, while the music got louder and everyone sang. The air thick with smoke, and smelt like a gym. People rubbed up each other, kissed in the darkness, and a fight had broken out on the wet backyard lawn. Few had passed out, scattered like sticks as I watched their friends drag them out the front door. But as the night grew on not many were standing, but crawling like worms across the lounge room floor.

I still wonder how she came to see me, even talk to me for that matter, because I\'m sure I didn\'t look appealing at the time she approached me. She smiled and sat down beside me, telling me how her friends had left her behind. I told her not to worry she could stay at my place, for it was my party of course. An hour went by and we talked a lot about ourselves and it so came we both were bisexual. I had told her how my last girlfriend was very abusive and that she lied about me to all of my friends. She told me she had never been through such a relationship, but how her girlfriend cheated on her.

This girl was very pretty, and the whole time I just wanted to kiss her. I couldn\'t stop watching her speak, all I wanted was to steal but just one kiss. Her hair golden blonde, flowed down to her back and her eyes so green, even the grass did envy. She hadn\'t much tan, and wasn\'t too tall but had a smile like the sunshine, warming and true. My head was a mess, and my hands were so sweaty. I\'m sure it was impulse but I leaned over and kissed her. Inside I was nervous but felt so alive, as she kissed me back. I raised a hand to her cheek and ran my tongue along her lips. She opened her mouth and touched my tongue with hers. I kissed her so deep it was though her soul I touched.

I stop kissing her for a moment and asked her did she want this. She smiled and took my hand putting it to her lips. I stood up and motioned her to the bedroom. I took her hand and walked down the hall as she quietly said to me, \"I want you inside me\".
I was pretty shocked, yet laughed to myself because I wanted every part of her. My body was going crazy as I locked that cold door but she made me feel so hot just by touching my skin. I lit a candle and turned off the light while she stood by the door undoing her shirt. I couldn\'t control it, my senses went berserk so I ran across the room and pinned her to the door. She kissed me again as I slid off her shirt running my fingers along her shoulders and down to her wrists. She unbuttoned my jeans and slid her hands up my shirt. I kissed along her ear and down her neck to her breast as I undone her bra. But before I got it off, she ripped my shirt up over my head and kissed across my stomach.

She pushed me backwards towards my bed and as we got closer, I took her wrist and laid her down. I unlaced her skirt and threw it on the floor, landing somewhere near the door not far from my shirt. She looked into my eyes and sat up kissing my lips, tasting salty and wet from getting so hot. I kissed her back down and ran my hand over her thigh, while the other traced her body, over her stomach and onto her soft breasts. I ran my finger in circles on her nipple, as she sighed and put her hands around my sides. I kissed and sucked my way down her neck, still tracing her thigh with my fingers. Her hands ran up over my warm breasts and she removed my bra kissing my shoulder and arm while I teased her, slightly touching her through her underwear.

She sighed even louder as I began to suck her nipple, licking them in circles and touching them softly. As we got even hotter, she grabbed my hand and ran it along her body down to her stomach. With one hand I managed to remove her underwear and throw them to the side. She pushed me over and started pulling off my jeans along with a sock that got stuck. She kissed up my thigh and onto my stomach, using her fingers to pull off my undies. She knelt over the top of me and smiled down at me, I knew that this was going to be something I\'d never forget. My hands glided up her warm thighs and around her sides as she bent down and kissed me on the neck. Her hands were cold as they went over my stomach, and onto my breasts again, she made me gasp as they touched my nipples, but made me quiver when she licked around them with that warm tongue, slowly sucking them and kissing them.

I slid my hand across her thigh up to her clit. I ran my finger down along it and to her warm, wet opening, teasingly letting my finger in and taking it out going back to her clit, softly massaging it in circles. She moaned when I\'d put pressure on her and even louder as I went faster. Her lips met mine, even saltier than the last, moaning and sighing in my mouth as I went inside her with two fingers. I touched her deep inside and moved my fingers in and out of her slowly as her hips fell in motion with me, her kisses even deeper than my fingers inside of her. I stopped for a brief moment then quickly moved my fingers back and forth as she groaned with pleasure, her hips grinding up and down and her wet lips moved across my face. Her cold hand moved fast along the side of my body and down to my crotch. As she touched me, I sighed from the coldness of her fingers. She slid herself inside me and moved in time with me, both of us grinding against each other moving as fast as we could go. We kissed each other so passionately I couldn\'t decide what was better, the sex or the kiss.
She ran her wet finger onto my clit and rubbed it in circles as fast as she could. She made me sigh and moan, as being inside her and being touched by her was making me cum. Her lips touched my breasts as my head seemed to go back from the pleasure I felt, while my other hand ran up the side of her wet body and back down to her thigh while I fingered her inside and moaned with desire.

She grabbed both my hands and put them behind my head. She kissed me for a while then worked her way down my body, kissing every inch down to my thighs. I closed my eyes and began to breath heavy as she started to lick my clit and softly suck it. I moaned so loud when her tongue went inside me. It was warm and so wet she licked up and around me. When she licked my clit again I felt her fingers inside me, and I arched up with every lick and finger. Going faster and faster and I moaned louder and quicker, I even cried out while she continued to suck me. I grabbed a fist full of sheet as I climaxed and came, throwing my head back and sighing with pure pleasure. She kissed my hand and I tried to stop breathing, it was though I had ran a thousand meters. I sat up and kissed her, laid her down beneath me and kissed her wet neck and warm silken stomach.

Her thighs felt like rose petals, soft and so fine. I kissed up her thigh, until I reached her wet pussy licking her clit. Her breath got real heavy, and she ran her fingers through my hair. Playing with her clit, I used the tip of my tongue, butterfly licking her and sucking on her clit. She couldn\'t control it and her body rose, her legs were squirming and her hands clutching the sheets.

My fingers went inside her as I continued to lick her out, going in time with her movements and sighing. She moaned out my name as she cum over my fingers and onto my tongue. It was so bitter and warm. I slid up and kissed her, tasting both of us when our lips met and she wrapped her arms around me. I laid on top of her, stroking her hair, while we stared each other deep in the eyes. The light was so dim as the candle burned down and the air now filled with strawberry scent from the flame on the wax. Our breathing slowed down and she smiled at me, kissing my lips every now and then, stopping to say that she felt like she was in heaven when I was inside her. I smiled back and told her I felt the same, only it was like a drug I had taken and was like a rush inside my head. Her hair was a mess which flowed over my pillow. She was so beautiful lying there looking up at me. Strands of my hair fell across my face sticking to it from the sweat. I brushed my hair back and kissed her nose.

I realised I should go check on the party, that by now should have dwindled away, so I got up and put on some clothes and went out to my living room. A couple were left passed out on the floor so I gave them all a kick and told them to fuck off. I had alot of cleaning up to do, but I had other things on my mind. I locked up the house and went back to my room, where she was lying under my sheets with her head on my pillow. Closing my door once more, I picked up our clothes that were strewn across my bedroom floor and placed them on the desk. I left her a towel on the beside table and a rose placed on it. Crossing the room I heard her call my name and I blew out what was left of the strawberry candle. I went back to the bed and slid in beside her.
Her arm laid across my stomach and I put my arm behind her neck, kissing her forehed. I brought her in closer. I could feel her warm breath on my body and her skin pressed against mine. I hadn\'t felt so complete in a long time. Smiling, I closed my eyes.

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I've submited this under another account ~kyza but I think it's better suited for this place....Everyone likes it..but yeah.
I thought you all would enjoy it as much as I did writing it.
I wrote this last year for a friend of mine, a year later I thought I would upload it on here.

The picture above was taken last year when me and *nyssi stayed down the Gold Coast in QLD Australia.

By ~kyza

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:iconrazewolf:
all I can say is...I need a towel...great Job!
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:iconpoeticphotographer:
That was amazing.. but not something I should of read in class...
Fav<3
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~blackhorsewhispers Sep 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
ahhhh so sensual <3
i feel so deprived now :(
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~xCreepyCrawler May 30, 2007   Interface Designer
I love this.
It made me very happy. :)
You can definatly feel the love between you two.
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:iconxprincessxviperx:
Whoa!
Amazing! Awesome work!
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:iconrhayningacidity:
Brilliant bit of work you have here. It's amazing, the feelings race and they're all so familiar. Wonderful!

Dark Prodigy:frail:
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:iconblackcat1333:
great work!! Love the writing!!
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~Lilithx13 Dec 21, 2004   Photographer
Wow...erotic but sweet as well. Some good reading. :nods:
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:iconithildae:
I'm not surprised everyone loved it... *cofcof*onehandedtyping*cofcof*

Porn, but written nicely enough to be tolerable - even good.

Maybe it's just me, but I find it difficult to reconcile the concept of porn with that of art.

Still, despite myself I can't really slam this. It's quite nice ...

The cliches did nothing for the story, though.
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Very picture-able... It is amazing and somewhat a little power in the story for me to imagine it. You are so lucky to have that kind of beautiful soulful situation. I am giving you a round of claps what you had done the radical writing these your spite of soul story. I loved it. Thank you for sharing us and have a wonderful relationship futher. :)
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