Rock Haven by ~OpenMindedEloquence
[Title] Rock Haven
The wishing well is under construction
The stars are gone from the city lights’ destruction
“I see”……said the blind man
As he……saw no god, but his own heaven
“Oh my god”……said the atheist
It’s always of nature
I wish and wonder
Why
Then I start thinking about my time
Now instead I embellish
The release
Of my sickened leer
At your thick-headed fear
So if you just came out and under from your rock
Do yourself a favor and don’t give a fuck
It’s always of nature
I wish and wonder
Why
Then I laugh at myself
As I still don’t try
My own heaven
Is my own haven
But
The bigots
Move in with the hypocrites
As a happy
Cynical
Tyrannical
Family
You’ve even got the atheists saying…
“I swear to god…”
“If you don’t stop…”
“You will become the real weed of the crop”
“Not those whom you call faggots…”
“You fucking bigots…”
How can you be so selfish?
Bring others into your own hell
Where love could embellish
But instead it’s a hellish
One way mirrored shell
Now instead I embellish
The release
Of my sickened leer
At your thick-headed fear
So if you just came out and under from your rock
Do yourself a favor and don’t give a fuck
My own heaven
Is my own haven
Come on inside
How
I know you have witnessed
How
I know you could not have missed it
Our genocide
Now
Our love is marred
Now
Our love is impaired
Who would’ve dared?
Who could’ve cared?
I would
Oh, the next time I see
Our fellow bigots laugh and stare
At their fellow faggots who give and care
Oh, the next time I see this cynical treason
My fists will give them a clinical reason
To act so mentally impaired
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This one has a very personal and powerful meaning to me.
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Um, you're christian right? And you're telling all the tohers to stop being so discriminative upon homosexuals? or something like that? Correct me is im wrong.
Its still an amazing piece, therefore its going into my favourites .... in fact ... its the first written piece i have ever put into my favourites.
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The just of this song is basically about how "bigots" and hypocrites are hiding and ignoring everything else but there own life, in the process creating there own little "rock haven". Obviously this song concentrates more so on the bigotry and hypocrisy towards the "non-straight" society. But I am fair with it and I do mention hypocrisy IN the "non-straight" society too...which many people tend to dwell on and take advantage of. Knowing this you'll probably get the metaphors more...and especially the title's meaning.
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Instant gratification is overrated.
Patience is no longer a virtue.
It doesn't matter how long we've waited.
It's out with the old and in with the new.
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Instant gratification is overrated.
Patience is no longer a virtue.
It doesn't matter how long we've waited.
It's out with the old and in with the new.
Oh, and I'm not dissing atheists or anything...I was only using them in a situation of hypocrisy. I couldn't help but use the F-bomb quite a bit for some reason. It was probably do to the amount of anger towards the subject.
The just of this song is basically about how "bigots" and hypocrites are hiding and ignoring everything else but there own life, in the process creating there own little "rock haven". Obviously this song concentrates more so on the bigotry and hypocrisy towards the "non-straight" society. But I am fair with it and I do mention hypocrisy IN the "non-straight" society too...which many people tend to dwell on and take advantage of. Knowing this you'll probably get the metaphors more...and especially the title's meaning.
(Sorry for the double post
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Instant gratification is overrated.
Patience is no longer a virtue.
It doesn't matter how long we've waited.
It's out with the old and in with the new.
Don't worry about changing it. I was just letting you know. I'm already grateful enough to have one of my lyrics posted here.
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Instant gratification is overrated.
Patience is no longer a virtue.
It doesn't matter how long we've waited.
It's out with the old and in with the new.
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