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this halo slipped around
my neck
this halo slipped around
my neck.
it could kill.
it could cut me off,
it could cut me off.
i am...
i am everything
i am everything
that went wrong.
i went wrong
and i am wrong.
hello,
i am gone.
i said i am gone
from here.
and while i lick the blood
yes,
i lick the blood that
flows
freely off your
heart
freely off your
heart.
set me up for a
set me up for a
breakdown...
i am blind.
blind to the
structural integrity of
the
structural integrity of
life.
do you think i
could love.
do you think i
could love.
i can love.
i can do an-y-thing
i and i.
i and i.
sit by and
by.
by and by.
i can do it,
i know.
i know.
i and i.
©2004-2010 #dapride
:icondapride:

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Submission by: ~vampiretr

"everything you understand rots"

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:iconanimefeind:
i like this a lot

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"The dark shattered underbelly of the american dream, avoid it like the plague, it stares at you from your bathroom mirror"-
:blackrose: :sadangel:
"We walk the streets at night, we go where eagles dare, they pick up every movement, they pick up every loser with jaded eyes and features, you think they really care?"
:iconnaughty-nate:
:clap: That is a great poem!!!! :+fav: Its so cool!!
:iconskeevy:
Rock on, I love your phrasing, I love repetition and the stuttering feel that it adds to this poem. Seriously, and excellent poem. I'm going to look in your gallery now, and see what's up.

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:pride: *dapride
:writersblock: ~WeCritique

paper thin blue skies are all that stand in front of me...

-skeevy loves you
:iconlord-nougat:
Wow, i love this. It's like, if chanted rapidly, rhythmically, what we'd have once called a 'patter song'.

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nougat


n : nuts or fruit pieces in a sugar paste


"You've gotten your fruity nuts in my sugar paste!"
NEW Nougat Cups!
:iconblind-faith:
One word to describe this: :faint:

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YoU KNOw yoU'rE INsaNe wHEn yOu TrY tO KiLL yoUr iMaGInarY FriEnD.. .. .
:stab::evillaugh::crazy::ignore:

:rose:Reach Out And Touch Faith:rose:
:iconserji:
:+favlove:


really great work.

--
In the end only kindness matters.
:iconyekdorb:
fwoosh, amazing....
:icongenesisangel:
awsome, sad and scary, but awsome, me love :D

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life sucks, im never gonna find anyone to love and to love me. so now i hide myself in the darkness of my heart.

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